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In order to gain essential constructive criticism of our initial trailer draft we presented it to the class, and collected their feedback in order to locate possible improvements. After a careful analysis of the feedback we received we allocated these points as required changes;
In order to gain essential constructive criticism of our initial trailer draft we presented it to the class, and collected their feedback in order to locate possible improvements. After a careful analysis of the feedback we received we allocated these points as required changes;
· Don’t cut the opening shot, use the length of it the perhaps provide a voiceover which in conjunction to this highlights detail and background to the plot, which according to our feedback, was vague.
· We also need to establish that Alice (elle) does in fact die, and this is what sends our character into his downward spiral of depression and drug addiction
· Will needs to appear in extra footage displaying his depression
· Establish that the woods are a drug fuelled fantasy, and the use of drug are what sent him there
· Point of view shot in the mugging scene
· Add new or alter the current music, less continuous
· We need to successfully introduce the drug dealers character
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